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[ayoub]

I did it
It was me
no other
no one else to blame
and yet
not only I
am punished
I am determined
I am focussed
The road is long
And I will walk it
for the rest of my life.

Comments

[infinitywhisper.livejournal.com]

punished?

I don't think I understand that stanza.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Not only I
am punished

It's about accepting that my actions will hurt others, so while I bear the blame for my actions, I'm not the only one who will be hurt by them...

[infinitywhisper.livejournal.com]

hm.

[childeofloki.livejournal.com]

Your last few poems have been laden with guilt, my friend. Am I missing something?

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Not any more, my friend :)

[childeofloki.livejournal.com]

Well, at least that's taken care of.