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Ayoub™ ([personal profile] ayoub) wrote2006-11-28 11:53 am
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Rain
falling
all around me
let it surround me
envelop me
hold me
in its cold embrace
let the rain sing
its chorus of splashes
and use my skin
to find notes
not usually found
in this concrete world
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[identity profile] wiltinwickwitch.livejournal.com 2006-11-28 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
beautiful; so beautiful
love and blessed be
xxx

[identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com 2006-11-28 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

[identity profile] soulview.livejournal.com 2006-11-28 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
This feels like a mourning poem. But it also feels hopeful.

[identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought it was positive.... :)
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