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[ayoub]

Rain
falling
all around me
let it surround me
envelop me
hold me
in its cold embrace
let the rain sing
its chorus of splashes
and use my skin
to find notes
not usually found
in this concrete world

Comments

[wiltinwickwitch.livejournal.com]

beautiful; so beautiful
love and blessed be
xxx

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :D

[soulview.livejournal.com]

This feels like a mourning poem. But it also feels hopeful.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I thought it was positive.... :)