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[ayoub]

Tick
The second hand
quivers
to a halt
a breath
exhaled
a light
flickers
a bird flaps
its wings
a picture
caught
Tock
the hand
moves again
Time
only moving
when the hand
quivers
from point
to
point

Comments

[evergladesqueen.livejournal.com]

beautiful!
*hugs*

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thanks B :D

Re: Tick....Tock

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :D

I'm proud of this one... :)

[mysticpickle.livejournal.com]

How am I supposed to top a compliment like that?? *winks The poem was beautiful but even I have to admit only second to sirenitys response to it! I will never fail to marvel at the amazing range of emotions you manage to share with each different person here simply by being you. I must admit I am intrigued to learn more of the mind of the man so complex yet simple!

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

:D

Thank you...

Me... Well, me is a fluid concept right now... But I'm working on it :D

[empatia.livejournal.com]

i love this...amazing.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you!