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Tick
The second hand
quivers
to a halt
a breath
exhaled
a light
flickers
a bird flaps
its wings
a picture
caught
Tock
the hand
moves again
Time
only moving
when the hand
quivers
from point
to
point

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Date: 2006-12-18 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evergladesqueen.livejournal.com
beautiful!
*hugs*

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Date: 2006-12-19 09:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Thanks B :D
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Re: Tick....Tock

Date: 2006-12-19 08:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

I'm proud of this one... :)

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Date: 2006-12-19 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysticpickle.livejournal.com
How am I supposed to top a compliment like that?? *winks The poem was beautiful but even I have to admit only second to sirenitys response to it! I will never fail to marvel at the amazing range of emotions you manage to share with each different person here simply by being you. I must admit I am intrigued to learn more of the mind of the man so complex yet simple!

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Date: 2006-12-19 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
:D

Thank you...

Me... Well, me is a fluid concept right now... But I'm working on it :D

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Date: 2006-12-19 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] empatia.livejournal.com
i love this...amazing.

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Date: 2006-12-19 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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