Question of the Day

What makes you impatient?

Poetry Challenge from ragamuffen!

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My Version:

As something new
yet eternal
my heart rises
from the ground

Wishes and dreams
unfurl like petals
each a song
sweetly sung

Frozen in time
this pure moment
I will carry
beyond world's end

For this is me
and how I love
I give it freely
to you

My apologies to Rabbie, heh... I am a mere journeyman wordsmith :D

Interesting...

Add this to the list of foods that sound URGH but taste YUM...

Monkeygland Sauce

Heh, and a recipe to make it too!

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The music began.

He sensed
rather than heard
the deep bass

She watched
his body
begin to flow

Eyes locked
strangers once
but in that moment
they were bound

tied together
by waves of sound

Life began
at that moment
there was nothing more
in existence

Slowly circling
they drew closer
until clothes touched
yet skin did not
they breathed
the same air
their hearts
thumping
to the same rhythm

They stole touches
brief flashes
of skin touching skin
hands roaming
until neither knew
who was touching whom

They moved
undulating
pressing
body to body
as the music rose
to a crescendo

Hearts raced together
keeping apace
until there was nothing
but the beat in their ears
even the music
was lost
in each other
until

Silence

Life began again