Different...

[ayoub]

From Suzy's challenge was this spawned...
I'm not sure if it should have been a story, because that's how it started out...

Ruby red lips slid across pale white skin, searching for heat that was not there.
Tears slid down to the corners of her mouth, making her lips glisten even more.
She felt the thirst, but there was nothing left in this carcass, and he was her last friend.
Her cursed task was now complete, to consume the ones she loved.

Ruby red lips slid along his neck, and a sharp pain quickly followed.
Hunger in her eyes as she fed anew, never again replaced by sorrow.
All humans were playthings for her, but only until her hunger grew.
When she would pick her favourite, and drink of him until he died.

Ruby red lips slid along the rat's fur, hunted and hated she thirsted.
Caught in the act of feeding, by the father of the nubile son.
Now no man would approach her, without that accursed burning symbol.
Reduced to feeding on beasts, her beauty began to crumble.

Ruby red lips slid along the cold damp grass, as she was dragged away.
A stake in the heart in her weakened state, she could no longer defend.
Her soul cried mercy as the darkness took it, but her sins were no simple thing.
Her body would be burned as others before, to prevent it's evil spreading.

Comments

[oxsleep2dreamox.livejournal.com]

Mmmm....yum...I love vampire stories. Great job friend.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

This is the first time anyone has used it (the one liner) in such a way and repeated and I really like what you came up with.

I too, like Felicia (above comment), enjoy vampiric tales.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

It didn't start out that way though, my idea was more erotic, but then it kind of went out of my control.

I can say I like it too, which is rare :)

I'm glad you liked :D