Move

[ayoub]

Don't stop

Keep it going

Slow then fast
You keep moving
Keep responding
To the need

In the other

The one you love

Make them want it
Make your partner, your instrument
Sing

The sweetest songs

All by moving

Changing

Slow

Long

Quick and fast

It'll only work
The way it's supposed to
If you move together

And the winds of love
Guide your soul
And your singing soul
Guides your body

Move

Don't stop...

Comments

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

the movement in the poem is tangible and I love that because of how you've used the words and the words you've chosen. This movement could actually be interpretted more than one way which is good ;) It has that mischievous quality (or perhaps my mood made it so).

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I was definitely feeling mischievous writing it :D

[mighty-rontor.livejournal.com]

If you stop, death will find you.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Keep moving!