Quiver

Jan. 26th, 2006 12:05 pm
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A little tremble
Under my fingertips

Not quite a shiver

But it grows as I trace
patterns on your bare skin

Tracing towards
all the places that make you sigh

But not touching them

Yet

The tremble follows
Building as I explore
Drawing on your canvas
with the ink of touch

Sigh

The softest breath
escapes your lips
as I finally touch
where you want me to

S T R E T C H

Undulate

A most fantastic instrument
that I am learning to play

Arching

Singing your song
The one with no words
The purest sounds
of pleasure

Quiver

But no rest
as I restart my exploration
Of the wonder that is

You

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Date: 2006-01-26 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyc-poet.livejournal.com
oo beautifully seductive...i love it...i love how you wrote it, the way you broke it up, the images...♥ ~Sam~

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Date: 2006-01-26 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Thanks Sam :D

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Date: 2006-01-27 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inmyocean.livejournal.com
it's slowly seductive too .. soft and stroking on the senses.

beautifully done. I'm so enjoying your exploration into free verse.

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Date: 2006-01-27 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
I am too :D

Thank you :D

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