Good erotic writing. Ever read Jim Butcher's Death Masks? There's a good scene in there. Less is more with that kind of thing; people like Laurell K. Hamilton flog it into the damn ground and it's about as sexy as tech support.
Dreaming The scent of peaches on alabaster skin and the sigh as lips graze a nipple. Fingers sucked, inserted; a low moan of pleasure Orgasms rising and intertwined limbs. Lesbians.
Hot sweat Half naked Nipples held between teeth as a hand snakes into unzipped jeans. Lips ground into tender flesh punch fucking and breath play Oral sex as a hand grabs your hair and pulls you close. Strap-ons and leather. Dykes.
Right then. So, the flexible part of my hetero-flexibility leans toward a lesbian who wishes to play at being a dyke then. Both are exquisitely rendered here, Rachel.
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Date: 2007-10-19 10:35 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2007-10-19 12:41 pm (UTC)but sometimes a very short,
not extremely long short
story can do the trick.
You aren't referring to themes, are you?
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Date: 2007-10-19 01:50 pm (UTC)Style is more important than the action.
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Date: 2007-10-19 02:13 pm (UTC)Are you familiar with the term scat at all, re: wild animals?
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Date: 2007-10-19 02:20 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-10-19 02:22 pm (UTC)Scatplay=people shitting on each other.
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Date: 2007-10-19 03:35 pm (UTC)The scent of peaches
on alabaster skin
and the sigh
as lips graze a nipple.
Fingers sucked, inserted;
a low moan of pleasure
Orgasms rising and
intertwined limbs.
Lesbians.
Hot sweat
Half naked
Nipples held between teeth as a hand snakes
into unzipped jeans.
Lips ground into tender flesh
punch fucking and breath play
Oral sex as a hand grabs your hair
and pulls you close.
Strap-ons and leather.
Dykes.
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Date: 2007-10-19 03:53 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-10-19 03:59 pm (UTC)