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Bullets loaded in a gun
Not made of metal
But more deadly
Than any other weapon

These bullets don't merely kill
They create and destroy
With this weapon fully loaded
You can fight any war

What kind of weapon is this?
Where can I get these bullets?
Your mind is racing
Your hands, aching

You already have this gun
It's locked inside your skull
Load it with knowledge
Each new word a bullet

The more brothers you kill
The harder it becomes to fight
There's a war fought put there
That you've become a pawn in

The man with unlimited words
Has no end of ammunition
And from shadowed halls
He controls your lives

But a mind is a terrible thing to waste
And it's also a devastating weapon
One they don't want you to wield
Because they want to keep you down

It's harder to use this weapon
It's easier to pop a cap
They made it that way
To keep you dead

So what choice will you make?
Which gun are you going to load?

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Date: 2008-02-09 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leatherdykeuk.livejournal.com
Funny, people often say my sarcastic senryu are deadly.

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Date: 2008-02-09 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
And they are! :D

Thank you :)

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Date: 2008-02-09 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seegwa.livejournal.com
How true. Nicely done!

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Date: 2008-02-09 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

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Date: 2008-02-09 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chiropteraclan.livejournal.com
I'm thinking about this one. Still undecided which I will use. *smooches* I've mentioned you rock, right? :D

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Date: 2008-02-09 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Awwwwwww :D

Thanks...

Although, my poetry has left me feeling fairly "bleh" these days... :P

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Date: 2008-02-10 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chiropteraclan.livejournal.com
Works in progress hon. It's all part of the ebb and flow. xo

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Date: 2008-02-09 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donnickcottage.livejournal.com
Kerpow! Blam. Buddabudda! Beeyerroooo. Thuka Thuka Thuka!

I have spoken!

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Date: 2008-02-09 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
LMAO! :D

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