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Nov. 22nd, 2005 11:43 pmBeneath the coldest oceans of dreams
Lie the sleeping visions I have seen
Reality sank them like poorly built ships
But the ocean shares them with me
Beneath the frozen clouds of hope
Like the rainfall are my wishes
Crashing down on the world's hard ground
But kept alive in the floating ice
Beneath the icy floor of faith
In a coma lie my beliefs
Buried by the cold facts of life
Waiting for a sign to wake them
Beneath the ice around my heart
Beats your name repeatedly
Hidden where even I can barely hear
Love buried under layers of ice
The bold line was at the end of one of
autumn_eyes' poems... so I borrowed it :)
Here's a challenge for those who are interested, write a poem, and I'll reply using the last line of your poem, then you reply using my last line... Your first poem doesn't have to contain the last line of this one though, unless you want to :D
Should be fun :D
Lie the sleeping visions I have seen
Reality sank them like poorly built ships
But the ocean shares them with me
Beneath the frozen clouds of hope
Like the rainfall are my wishes
Crashing down on the world's hard ground
But kept alive in the floating ice
Beneath the icy floor of faith
In a coma lie my beliefs
Buried by the cold facts of life
Waiting for a sign to wake them
Beneath the ice around my heart
Beats your name repeatedly
Hidden where even I can barely hear
Love buried under layers of ice
The bold line was at the end of one of
Here's a challenge for those who are interested, write a poem, and I'll reply using the last line of your poem, then you reply using my last line... Your first poem doesn't have to contain the last line of this one though, unless you want to :D
Should be fun :D