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[ayoub]

Di...
A child born, grows
and is moved
from one place
to the next
happy moments
sad moments
terrifying moments
love
hate
indifference
pain
each a companion
Joy
a goal
nearly reached
within touching distance
My life
All there has been
has led me here
to this moment
...ve

into you...

Comments

[evergladesqueen.livejournal.com]

ay que sexy.
i ♥it!
*hugs*

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I didn't think of it as sexy...

But thanks :)

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

I really like how you broke up the word 'Dive' and placed the other words, thoughts, feelings between. Beautiful. The journey of child to this time right now is wonderful.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

I was going for the "life flashing before your eyes" idea :)