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[ayoub]

Gave you everything
made you what you are
and what did I get
used
chewed
saved for when you had need
regardless of my needs

Enough

I put you on a pedestal
not for you to look down on me
ridicule me
you called me sick and twisted
used my secrets to hurt me
and you still try
to make my heart bleed

Enough

I don't need you any more
I can't take back all I gave
but I can take back my heart
heal it within myself
and face the world
as I am
not as you want me to be

Rebirth

Comments

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

I really like how the single lines progressed and evolved from 'enough', 'enough' to 'rebirth'.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thanks Suzy...

I nearly removed the "Rebirth" line, but then left it in there at the last minute :)

[evergladesqueen.livejournal.com]

"I put you on a pedestal
not for you to look down on me
ridicule me"

wow. i love that line!
*hugs*

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :D

[voldelange.livejournal.com]

i like it! I can relate with what you said through this poem...

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)