(no subject)
Jun. 3rd, 2006 10:34 pmThe dance of the seven veils
is as nothing
to the way you move
arms raised
hips sway
your body rapt
wrapped
in waves of sound
it invades your senses
caresses your flesh
hypnotises your bones
guides you unthinking
into this dance
that leaves me breathless
is as nothing
to the way you move
arms raised
hips sway
your body rapt
wrapped
in waves of sound
it invades your senses
caresses your flesh
hypnotises your bones
guides you unthinking
into this dance
that leaves me breathless
(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-04 12:55 pm (UTC)I like the 'rapt' and 'wrapped' in succession ..
and the last line, I like how you finished it.
(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-04 03:38 pm (UTC)Thanks!