Day 43

Jun. 15th, 2006 10:03 am
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The wait is nearly over
A wait that should
never have been needed
Separation due to
her unthinking rage
but now she cannot prevent
your return to me
I love you
dearest children
the better parts of me

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Date: 2006-06-15 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pi-girl.livejournal.com
I'm not sure I understand...

I'm not sure I understand the whole days thing....day 43 since what?

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Date: 2006-06-15 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
I'm doing a 100 poems in 100 days thing, and this is Day 43...

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Date: 2006-06-17 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pi-girl.livejournal.com
oh ok, cool!

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Date: 2006-06-15 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inmyocean.livejournal.com
The last three lines make this small piece perfect.

Your love for them shines through.

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Date: 2006-06-15 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Thank you Dear one :)

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Date: 2006-06-15 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burnedfeather.livejournal.com
...it must be hard stuffing that much emotion in few words! Beautifully done!

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Date: 2006-06-15 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Thank you my friend :)

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Date: 2006-06-16 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
BAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

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