Excuse me while I float for a while....
Apr. 19th, 2007 10:03 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ayoubIn my eye, a light
a life giving thing
a spark of creation
a universe
in a speck
I can't see it
but I can feel it
entering my mind
a miniscule pulse
functionally electricity
but so much more
a tiny byte
of information
a final piece
of a puzzle
that makes up
a picture
a vision
of unimaginable beauty
that everyone may see
but not all can perceive
And the moment passes
and I turn to search
for the next perfect moment...
a life giving thing
a spark of creation
a universe
in a speck
I can't see it
but I can feel it
entering my mind
a miniscule pulse
functionally electricity
but so much more
a tiny byte
of information
a final piece
of a puzzle
that makes up
a picture
a vision
of unimaginable beauty
that everyone may see
but not all can perceive
And the moment passes
and I turn to search
for the next perfect moment...
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Date: 2007-04-19 09:20 am (UTC)I get this strong feeling of scrabbling for the spark, attempting to capture it, remember it or understand it or something. Like a fleeting thought that won't quite coalesce. Your poetry gives me the urge to reach for it, vainly try to grab at it, like you would a flying bug, yet never quite catch it.
Nice imagery. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Nutty
(fleeting by)
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Date: 2007-04-19 10:15 am (UTC)Thank you!
I'm glad it inspired that feeling :)
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Date: 2007-04-19 02:35 pm (UTC)I can feel sincerity in each word- THAT is writing my friend!
Love n' stuff,
L.
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Date: 2007-04-19 08:01 pm (UTC)*hugs*