Reviving an old game...

[ayoub]

...just for all the creative people out there!

I put down ten words, in no particular order, and you post in the comments a poem, a story, even a picture or a drawing, that contains or illustrates all ten words.

You can use the words in any tense, or as plurals.

Let's see who's game :)

The words:

Lily
Skirt
Fire
Break
Phone
Ocean
Jazz
Book
Child
Blood

And now, my effort:

She walked on the beach, a Lily in her hand
And the Fire in my soul ignited
Her short Skirt so tight I could not stop staring
The Book on my lap forgotten

A Phone number to hunt but my tongue is tied
And my Blood has turned to ice
I feel like a Child but my thoughts of you
Are as innocent as the Ocean is shallow

I say hello, a bundle of nerves
And your smile lights up my world
I ask you your name, "I'm Ella" you say
In a voice like the Jazz queen herself

I ask you whether you're here alone
And you're smile melts me within
My heart Breaks as you show me your ring
And you can tell my well wishes are empty

Fun :)

Comments

Here is my failed attempt

[oxsleep2dreamox.livejournal.com]

She sits by the fire
With a book in her hand
Listening to the jazz music played by her favorite band
She waiting in her lily skirt
Wishing that some day
her inner child would come and break her away from all this hurt

She has been sitting here for days
Thinking to herself this is just some kind of silly phase
The phone no longer rings
The blood continues to pour from her wings
And she can still smell the ocean water in the air

Re: Here is my failed attempt

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Not exactly failed...

I like it :)

Re: Here is my failed attempt

[oxsleep2dreamox.livejournal.com]

Thanks