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10 more words:

Wave, Liquid, hypnotise, siren, undermine, joy, crave, ego, leave, body

My attempt, but can you see the trick I've used?

Like a wave washing
Over my waiting body
Vast and powerful
Elemental force

Liquid fire in my veins
Urging me ahead
Siren's song hypnotises
Touch is all I crave

She raises all of this
Overpowering my ego
Undermining my will
Leaving me hers

For pleasure
Unlimited joy
Come to me
Keep me alive

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Date: 2005-11-01 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Whew!

Hot stuff :D

All the words very well used...

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Date: 2005-11-01 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inmyocean.livejournal.com
clever little trick:
Love
Lust
Soul
Fuck

spelled out with the beginning of each letter per stanza.

smart boy. :)

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Date: 2005-11-01 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
:D

Smart girl for figuring it out!

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