Another game

[ayoub]

10 more words:

Wave, Liquid, hypnotise, siren, undermine, joy, crave, ego, leave, body

My attempt, but can you see the trick I've used?

Like a wave washing
Over my waiting body
Vast and powerful
Elemental force

Liquid fire in my veins
Urging me ahead
Siren's song hypnotises
Touch is all I crave

She raises all of this
Overpowering my ego
Undermining my will
Leaving me hers

For pleasure
Unlimited joy
Come to me
Keep me alive

Comments

[pandoralily.livejournal.com]

siren songs lulling me to sleep.
hypnotize my head so i can see.
body still and mind awake.

liquid lovelyness trapped inside my head.
waves of color and light,
come to me,
leave me,
hold my pyche tight.

undermine my ego,
make my body small,
but make the joy everlasting.

wake me up when the sun shines.
when the bird sing and the flowers open.
but leave me here now.
here to dream.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Very nice :D