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Beneath the coldest oceans of dreams
Lie the sleeping visions I have seen
Reality sank them like poorly built ships
But the ocean shares them with me

Beneath the frozen clouds of hope
Like the rainfall are my wishes
Crashing down on the world's hard ground
But kept alive in the floating ice

Beneath the icy floor of faith
In a coma lie my beliefs
Buried by the cold facts of life
Waiting for a sign to wake them

Beneath the ice around my heart
Beats your name repeatedly
Hidden where even I can barely hear
Love buried under layers of ice

The bold line was at the end of one of [livejournal.com profile] autumn_eyes' poems... so I borrowed it :)

Here's a challenge for those who are interested, write a poem, and I'll reply using the last line of your poem, then you reply using my last line... Your first poem doesn't have to contain the last line of this one though, unless you want to :D

Should be fun :D

Re: this was fun :)

Date: 2005-11-23 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
A wonderful world
Where hatred is dead
And kindness reigns
Over humankind
Where each raindrop
Is a perfect thing
And every dawn
A sight to behold

Re: this was fun :)

Date: 2005-11-23 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whatilove.livejournal.com
A sight to behold
You lived so long in my mind
Your words caressed me
soothed me
loved me.
I longed for your hands
and body to do the same.
And now you stand in front of me.
I just want to stay
and stare
and not ruin
this perfect moment.

Re: this was fun :)

Date: 2005-11-23 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
This perfect moment
Where no words are needed
Eyes talk more
Than mouths ever could
Heart beholds heart
In timeless wonder
Even touch is unnecessay
For two who are one

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