Let's all write!

[ayoub]

Give me a line to start a poem with, but, the deal you make, is to write another poem in response, taking the last line from mine as your first line.

Be brave... writing doesn't hurt a bit...

Comments

Better the devil you know than the one you don't.

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

Roses are red

Re: Better the devil you know than the one you don't.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Roses are red
Like the blood
That falls
From skin pricked by
Sharp thorns

Re: Better the devil you know than the one you don't.

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

Sharp thorns
slice deep
Juices well up
streaming through the openings
The fruit remains virginal

Re: Better the devil you know than the one you don't.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

The fruit remains virginal
As is her wish
For she will not suffer
Any old prick

:P

Touche'

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

Any old prick
will not due
Taste comes with the fruit
Not from being
A thorn in the side.

Re: Touche'

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

A thorn in the side
Annoyance in mind
Tear it out
Bleed to heal

Re: Touche'

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

Bleed to heal
Heal to bleed
What you would steal
I still need

[jeremyb.livejournal.com]

It was a dark and stormy night

Re: Touche'

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I still need
And yet I don't have
But I'll wait
Waiting is enough

[fire-fox01.livejournal.com]

I need to feel the truth

Re: Touche'

[fire-fox01.livejournal.com]

I love that!!

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

It was a dark and stormy night
And yet the walked
Unafraid
For they braved the rain and wind
Together
Holding hands against the weather

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I need to feel the truth
For all I've had were lies
Delivered through painted smiles
I have no patience left

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

Waiting is enough
for those not brave
Biding one's time
Maneuvering the pawns
Setting the stage
Battle commences
"Come now.
Are you brave?"

Re: Touche'

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

*blush*
I like short, direct points in poetry.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Are you brave?
I have the courage
To reach my goal
But waiting is
A part of every battle

Re: Touche'

[fire-fox01.livejournal.com]

Those are my favorite!

Do you write much?

[jeremyb.livejournal.com]

Holding hands against the weather
Their bodies trembling
But not from the cold
These two strangers
Lost alone
They came together
For a moment

[fire-fox01.livejournal.com]

I have no patience left
My energy is drained
You left me torn and battered
Soaked in the pouring rain

Re: Touche'

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

Not as much as some people *coughs at anarkian* would like. Mostly it's to stretch my brain or to vent.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

For a moment
Their sun rose
And the storm abated
As they stepped Into
A slice of heaven

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

ok fine this is your line

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

the noisey dark

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

A part of every battle
a part of every outcome
There has to be a loser
I am not one.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I am not one
I am with mine
But should you requre
Dear comrade
A sword to help you fight
Friends, to war
Side by side