Let's all write!

[ayoub]

Give me a line to start a poem with, but, the deal you make, is to write another poem in response, taking the last line from mine as your first line.

Be brave... writing doesn't hurt a bit...

Comments

Better the devil you know than the one you don't.

[cmerun12.livejournal.com]

Roses are red

Re: Better the devil you know than the one you don't.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Roses are red
Like the blood
That falls
From skin pricked by
Sharp thorns

[jeremyb.livejournal.com]

It was a dark and stormy night

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

It was a dark and stormy night
And yet the walked
Unafraid
For they braved the rain and wind
Together
Holding hands against the weather

[fire-fox01.livejournal.com]

I need to feel the truth

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I need to feel the truth
For all I've had were lies
Delivered through painted smiles
I have no patience left

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

ok fine this is your line

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

ok fine this is your line
do with it what you will
I'll sit here and wait
Go on, create!

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

the noisey dark

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

The noisy dark
Falling in shards
Ready to cut
To send rivers of blood
Into the black

[sabriel007.livejournal.com]

silently, she screams

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

silently, she scream
tears at her bonds
too long was she tied
Too many tears cried

[miriyasterling.livejournal.com]

Blood drips like crimson tears...

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Blood drips like crimson tears
from the hole you tore into me
As you reached in and took
My still beating heart

[mighty-rontor.livejournal.com]

Upon the hill alone a house of gray...

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Upon the hill alone a house of gray
Where the funny people stay
The ones who are far from amusing
A place where even animals fear to stray

[dazzedelf.livejournal.com]

My zipper is broken...

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

My zipper is broken
and I love these trousers
what is a boy to do
Can somebody fix it?

[ex-nothingto835.livejournal.com]

love isn't pretty

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Love isn't pretty
its beautiful
but you have
to be a lover
to see the beauty

Here's one I've been trying to write a poem for recently...

[kalquessa.livejournal.com]

Will no one take this crown from me?

Re: Here's one I've been trying to write a poem for recently...

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Will you take this crown from me?
I never asked for it
Or wanted it
Forced as it was upon my brow
This symbol of power
Too much I fear
For a single soul

[suburbiadaze.livejournal.com]

I am not the single sock, I am the mismatched set. Use that statement to build on, not start with.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I am not the single sock
Not forlorn like that
I am the mismatched set
Where are my other two halves?

[yndy.livejournal.com]

Okay, I'm game.

Your Line:

It was surely grief that lingered there

I'll check for mine when I get home from picking up Kira! ;)

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

It was surely grief that lingered there
In the darkness she hid so well
Only the practiced eye could seee
The slightest crack in every smile

[torisrabbit.livejournal.com]

intertwined like weeds...

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Intertwined like weeds
in a long forgotten garden
each striving to reach the sun
jostling for position
vying with each other
Battling to be victorious

[nyc-poet.livejournal.com]

thunder in your smile

♥ ~Sam~

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thunder in your smile
Storms in your eyes
Clouds on your brow
What have I done now?