Let's all write!

[ayoub]

Give me a line to start a poem with, but, the deal you make, is to write another poem in response, taking the last line from mine as your first line.

Be brave... writing doesn't hurt a bit...

Comments

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thunder in your smile
Storms in your eyes
Clouds on your brow
What have I done now?

[nyc-poet.livejournal.com]

(i like yours, it's simple yet strong)
What have I done now?
I'm not very stable right now
But neither are you
You sway from side to side
Cold tears splash down my cheeks
Blank stares
Hazy eyes
You fall to your knees
But it's too late for your surrender
There's already blood on both our hands
♥ ~Sam~

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

I like yours :)

[nyc-poet.livejournal.com]

thanksss :D ♥ ~Sam~