Let's all write!
Feb. 10th, 2006 02:45 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ayoubGive me a line to start a poem with, but, the deal you make, is to write another poem in response, taking the last line from mine as your first line.
Be brave... writing doesn't hurt a bit...
Be brave... writing doesn't hurt a bit...
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Date: 2006-02-10 09:43 pm (UTC)She pulls away
Staring at me
She looks confused
I return the gaze
As the sun fades
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Date: 2006-02-10 10:49 pm (UTC)and reality returns
In her eyes
a memory unsure
it will take time
for her to see
that heaven truly rests with me
(no subject)
Date: 2006-02-13 02:14 pm (UTC)is an illusion to some
a goal for others
the truth for one
the pinnacle for all
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Date: 2006-02-13 02:24 pm (UTC)this heavenly aspiration
sometimes the climb is easy
and other times treacherous
But regardless of cuts and falls
and any failure other than death
It is the only aspiration worth having
The only mountain worth climbing
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Date: 2006-02-13 08:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-02-13 08:33 pm (UTC)You really need to do more poetry... The stuff you wrote here was very good :)
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Date: 2006-02-13 08:35 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-02-13 08:36 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-02-13 08:37 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-02-13 08:41 pm (UTC)