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Give me a line to start a poem with, but, the deal you make, is to write another poem in response, taking the last line from mine as your first line.

Be brave... writing doesn't hurt a bit...

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Date: 2006-02-10 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeremyb.livejournal.com
A slice of heaven
Was beaming upon them
A single ray of sun
Englufing like a spotlight
All the people stopped
Gazing at this sight

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Date: 2006-02-10 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Gazing at this sight
I turn to find
The one I wish
To share it with
And we find our own
With a single touch

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Date: 2006-02-10 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeremyb.livejournal.com
With a single touch
She pulls away
Staring at me
She looks confused
I return the gaze
As the sun fades

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Date: 2006-02-10 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
As the sun fades
and reality returns
In her eyes
a memory unsure
it will take time
for her to see
that heaven truly rests with me

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Date: 2006-02-13 02:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeremyb.livejournal.com
heaven truly rests with me
is an illusion to some
a goal for others
the truth for one
the pinnacle for all

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Date: 2006-02-13 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
The pinnacle for all
this heavenly aspiration
sometimes the climb is easy
and other times treacherous
But regardless of cuts and falls
and any failure other than death
It is the only aspiration worth having
The only mountain worth climbing

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Date: 2006-02-13 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeremyb.livejournal.com
Bravo... I'm not sure I can add anything worth anything to that.

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Date: 2006-02-13 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
:D

You really need to do more poetry... The stuff you wrote here was very good :)

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Date: 2006-02-13 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeremyb.livejournal.com
I had a little help... from you, and a little inspiration for a special someone.

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Date: 2006-02-13 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Let that inspiration flow!

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Date: 2006-02-13 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeremyb.livejournal.com
I'm formulating something... but I'm really more of a short story guy.

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Date: 2006-02-13 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayoub.livejournal.com
Short stories are great :D

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