Let's all write!

[ayoub]

Give me a line to start a poem with, but, the deal you make, is to write another poem in response, taking the last line from mine as your first line.

Be brave... writing doesn't hurt a bit...

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[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

the noisey dark

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

The noisy dark
Falling in shards
Ready to cut
To send rivers of blood
Into the black

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

into the black
with open eyes i go
waiting for enclosure
hoping for rest
soft silent peace

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

soft silent peace
chafes in time
when left confined
scream into dreams

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

scream into dreams
lose piece of mind
shaken and stirred
left sweaty, a mess
eyes wide open
errupted from rest

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

erupted from rest
interrupted
pulling back
retreating
searching for an exit

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

searching for an exit
from dream or reality
daylight is breaking
through the curtains beyond me
soft muted rays now spilling below
wash away the dream i did not wish to know

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

wash away the dream I did not wish to know
stand in the rain and let it cleanse
open your eyes to the sky
let the raindrops into your mind

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

let the raindrops into your mind
let them wash away the stain of terror
confusion's own panic
difuse the lingering sense of dread
a new day with a new way to make a difference and take a stand

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

a new day with a new way to make a difference and take a stand
walk tall and confident to your goal without fear of failure
the demons have been washed away
fear no longer has power here

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

fear no longer has power here
silly ol dream
silly ol noisey night
thought i could hear those monsters under the bed
they were only reminents of stresses in my head
today is new and so am i
time to stretch and discover the sky

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

time to stretch and discover the sky
time to spread your wings and fly
south to where the clime is fairer
a place where welcome awaits

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

a place here welcome awaits
i shall spend the day
this morn i shall shake the dust
this noon i shall climb into a book
this time aft i shall explore a path
and this eve i will great the moon

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

and this eve I will greet the moon
as has my destiny long foretold
and on the morrow I will be reborn
Completed as the fates decreed

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

((greet))

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

:D