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[ayoub]

At the border
between day and night
When dreams mingle with reality
You stand atop a cliff
and watch an ocean
filled with broken wishes
and failed dreams
I see you from the sea
as I try to row towards you
in a little skiff I've fashioned
from the driftwood of dead dreams
I bound them together
breathed life into them
and I seek you now
the dreamer who gave up on dreams
holding one together
keeping it afloat
proving it can be done
and waiting for you to dive
into the sea with me

Comments

[evergladesqueen.livejournal.com]

wow! i really ♥ this one!!!
day of dreams 'eh?!
*hugs*

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

[sabriel007.livejournal.com]

this is so sweet...

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

[childeofloki.livejournal.com]

I am to worn out to turn a poetic compliment, but I am very impressed by this poem, my friend.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you man :)

[nyc-poet.livejournal.com]

aw i love this one so much! i love this:

I see you from the sea
as I try to row towards you
in a little skiff I've fashioned
from the driftwood of dead dreams
I bound them together
breathed life into them

so pretty ♥ ~Sam~

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thanks Sam :)

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

The romantic writer is not gone, and such dreams and romance are very much a part of not only your heart but your soul.

My favourite lines much like Sam are:

I see you from the sea
as I try to row towards you
in a little skiff I've fashioned
from the driftwood of dead dreams
I bound them together

A great piece Ayoub.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much S.

Sometimes, the muse hits :)

[hyrukpyo.livejournal.com]

this poem reminds me of something...maybe it was my not so hopeful http://hyruspoetry.livejournal.com/8274.html...this is a very lovely piece.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

I like to poem you linked :)

[hyrukpyo.livejournal.com]

oops it's http://hyruspoetry.livejournal.com/8274.html