Teacher...

[ayoub]

Finding my way
from being lost
and yet I'm not
abandoned

Far from bereft
of hope or dreams
just sometimes
worry creeps in

Strangers once
and then twice
somehow now
it's a third time

I don't want
to learn this
teach me not
such sadness

I must return
into my shell
taught to emerge
twice so far

May the third
rebirth of me
be the try
that succeeds

Comments

[kosta-pasta.livejournal.com]

very good. I loved it

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

Interesting. The progression is almost like a mantra. Nice.

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

My take on the song...

I haven't heard it for a while, and when it came up randomly, I started writing :)

(Ipod's still on shuffle since the other day :))

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

but there are things i dont want to learn
oh the last one i had made me cry...

i understand this. very very good work. very succinct way of letting

[ayoub.livejournal.com]

A great song :)

[xjenavivex.livejournal.com]

yeah. when i learned the song i was still young. ive gained perspective over the years. he wrote great songs. he really did.